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Vilhelmiina - Gangrel by Jmage-Art Vilhelmiina - Gangrel by Jmage-Art

    Here I go again
    Slipping further away
    Letting go again
    Of what keeps me in place
    I like it here
    But it scares me to death


This is a drawing of a character I'll be playing in the larp come May :) She's a Gangrel Unaligned.

I'm going to write a small story in relation to the section of lyrics I chose at a later point of time :)

EDIT: After recieving a review from :iconbombprincess: I have taken the time to change a few things if you wish to see the original it can be found here: [link]

    Vilhelmiina is from the mind of :iconjmage-art:
    Vampire: The Requiem is from the team at White Wolf.
    Lyrics are from All of this past by Sarah Bettens [link]
:iconbombprincess:
Critique by BombPrincess Dec 12, 2012, 7:00:27 AM
Very nice and neat! Her lineart is very clean, which is a major plus. The colors all work well together, and you set a nice mood with the background.
Now for the critique:
1. The line going down the middle of her neck should be muted. It is there for emphasis, I understand, but the way it is currently drawn implies that is simply one side of her neck, and that her neck is tiny and not centered inbetween her shoulders.
2. You're good at drawing breasts! You were able to make the lines very smooth. Try to bring this skill into her nose, where the nostril looks jagged and strange. Her lips are also turned downward on one side, making her face look a little droopy. Try to even everything out by drawing sketch lines that you can erase later (a centered line down the middle of her face).

I would also like to see more detail in her face and her close, since she seems like such a strong character. Overall I think this is a good piece.
Keep up the good work!
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